The "Swan Song Fiasco" (or, "Why are all those dead birds floating around?")
The name of Swan's conglomerate was originally "Swan Song Enterprises". Throughout Phantom of the Paradise, references to that company name are visible here and there.
But the most prominent references to "Swan Song" had to be obliterated in post-production because, shortly before the film's release, Led Zeppelin's manager, Peter Grant, created a real-life record company called "Swan Song Records". (Grant's company beat Phantom to the name by only a few months: Swan Song Records' first release, Bad Company's first album, came out in June of 1974, while Phantom premiered only a few months later, in October of that year.) Grant had previously managed a band called Stone the Crows, whose lead singer, Leslie Harvey, had been electrocuted onstage during a sound check in 1972, and Grant was apparently upset by the prospect of a film not only using the "Swan Song" name, but also, adding insult to injury, featuring an onstage electrocution of a rock star. The fucking crybaby. (For what it's worth, it is clear that Beef's onstage electrocution in Phantom was not inspired by Harvey's tragic accident: we have an early Phantom script from 1971, predating the Harvey incident, which includes the electrocution plot point.)
Grant childishly threatened to block release of the film, and De Palma and editor Paul Hirsch were forced to quickly make changes to remove from sight the most prominent references to "Swan Song Enterprises." As can be seen from this purchase order, dated October 1, 1974, the changes were still in progress only weeks before the film's release. And, based on this cost summary, implementation of the changes required about $22,000 in direct out of pocket expenses, which were absorbed by Fox.
In some cases, references to "Swan Song" were covered up by hand, frame-by-frame, typically by "Death Records," the dead songbird logo, or plain black masking. In other cases, the film was recut, with the "offending" footage actually removed. While the best job under the circumstances was done, these last minute mutilations are pretty glaring.
Fortunately, The Swan Archives has recovered and salvaged much of the original film that we believe was supposed to have been seen by the public, but which was deleted or modified to accommodate Grant. This footage had never been seen publicly until we posted it on the Archives, and we've recently made the original 35mm negatives available to the good folks at Arrow Home Video. More recently, we provided the footage to Scream Factory, for their bluray released in August, 2014. So now, for the first time, you can see many of these clips in all their glory, on Arrow's and Scream's respective Phantom BluRay releases. (While this page focuses on footage that relates to the Swan Song fiasco, you can see the rest of our exclusive collection of Phantom outtakes and cut scenes on our Outtakes Page. And while we love all of our readers, and enjoy receiving your email, please don't waste your time letting us know that the sound on the outtakes "doesn't work"; the footage is all silent.)
The modifications and deletions made to appease Grant are particularly annoying as it is apparent from viewing the deleted footage as a whole that the film, as planned and shot, employed a recurring theme or motif in which a sequence would open with a closeup of the Swan Song logo (on a billboard, on a record case, on a street sign, etc.), and the camera would then move away from the logo to show us the surrounding environment. The overall impression would have been that everything in the world centered on Swan Song, and that Swan was, in essence, everywhere. As a result of the changes, this lovely pattern disappeared completely from the film.
Here are a few examples of the opening moments of establishing shots being changed in this way.
Early in the film, we get a stationary shot of the Majestic's marquee, which has "The Juicy Fruits" badly optically superimposed over...something...and then we abruptly cut to Winslow affixing his "Winslow Leach at the Piano" banner on the Juicy Fruits billboard. It turns out that, as originally shot, this was much more graceful: the shot was supposed to open on the marquee, which was to say "Swan Song," and then drift slowly down to street level where Winslow could come into frame. Here's what we were supposed to see:
Click on Winslow to see this nice missing camera move, and check out that one sheet from The Sting in the theater's poster case!
Then, when Winslow first goes to Death Records, we're accustomed to seeing the dissolve from the "Death Records" title card to a shot of Winslow looking up at an offscreen street sign, to confirm he's at the right address. In this previously unseen footage, though, we can finally see -- in a camera move that echoes the earlier move from the Majestic marquee to Winslow -- that the first few frames of this sequence were supposed to have shown us that Death Records is located at the intersection of Swan Song Plaza and Death Drive! Who knew? It looks like the Death Records title card was inserted to occupy the time that the street sign previously filled, so that George Aliceson Tipton's music cue would still fit here.
Click on the streetsign so you can find Swan Song Enterprises.
Another sequence that lost its earliest moments is Beef's unveiling at the airport. Here, in the first few frames of this clip (which, again, were not included in the film as released) we get a good look at the "Swan Song" camera pack on the back of the cameraman.
You know the drill by now; click on the picture to see the footage.
Similarly, the first few frames appear to have been cut from the shot of Swan exiting his limo, again to eliminate the view of the guy with the Swan Song camera pack prominently featured on his back. Here's how we think it was supposed to look:
Click to see the frames you weren't meant to see!
And, in the establishing shot of Winslow on the Swanage roof, a similar trick is employed to reduce the impact of the Swan Song wording. Here again, the first few frames, which lingered on the Swan Song camera, don't appear in the final cut; the rest of this shot, though, was used a little later in the sequence. Again, we have the camera starting on "Swan Song," and then drifting slowly down to Winslow. Here's how that looked, as filmed:
Click here for more Swan Song, and in your face, Peter Grant.
Along similar lines, the first few seconds of the shot of Winslow entering the record factory were re-framed in the final cut, again because the shot begins with the "Swan Song" name clearly visible, this time on a record case. And once again, the camera was supposed to start on "Swan Song," and then drift from there to permit Winslow to come into frame:
Click here to see Winslow enter the factory.
And, of course, the Swan Song logo was removed even in cases where it wasn't featured in the opening shot in a sequence. For example, as Winslow approaches Swan's office building for the first time, we can see if we squint that "Swan Song Enterprises" is the signage over the doorway.
Later, when Winslow is being kicked out by Swan's goons, and the camera lingers, the name "Death Records" has been matted over "Swan Song Enterprises" above the front door.
Here's how that looked originally:
Click on Swan Song Enterprises to see the footage.
Want another? Winslow's walk up the Death Records corridor to the receptionist was supposed to be one continuous take, with the camera following Winslow all the way up the hallway and into the reception area...
...but as Winslow approaches, we cut away, in an abrupt, ugly and decidedly un-De Palma/Hirsch-like cut, to the receptionist for a moment, and then, by the time we get back to Winslow, he's all the way in the reception area.
Why do we have to cut away from Winslow as he goes through the doorway? Because if we hadn't, the "Swan Song Enterprises" lettering over the doors would have been visible. Here's how Winslow's walk up the corridor was supposed to look; you'll see the "forbidden sign" featured prominently...and you also get to see the receptionist's crazy red boots, never visible in the finished film:
Click on Winslow and the bikers to see Winslow's perilous journey up the corridor.
Here's an alternate take of Winslow's journey up the corridor, from beginning to end.
Even after the cutting, there was still a little evidence of the Swan Song name outside the reception area. We see it later, after Winslow has escaped from prison, when he comes here again. And this second time, on his way in, he's running so fast that no cut is necessary; instead, there's a momentary mask-off of the Swan Song name as Winslow pushes his way through the doors.
But, in the reverse-angle shot, as he heads back out, we see (in reverse) the lettering we weren't supposed to see:
In this alternate take of Winslow's return to Death Records, we can see the Swan Song lettering above the door on his way in. There's a false start here, as the stagehands apparently have trouble getting the doors to open.
It turns out that the Swan Song Receptionist's card file had a big Swan Song logo on it; we barely get to see that in the film. As well, there were yet more names in the card file, including Abbie Hoffman, (Phantom associate producer) Michael Arciaga, Jack Nicholson, Martin Scorsese (misspelled "Scorcece"), Charley Pride, John Prine, Kris Kristofferson, Neil Diamond, Mick Jagger, Bob Dylan, Carly Simon, and "Melanie."
Perhaps the most noticeable Swan Song deletion is in the airport scene. As Philbin approaches the plane, we can dimly see "Swan Song" written on the podium in the distance.
(No, the guy on the right is not Meat Loaf.)
As we get closer, however, the podium has the dead songbird where the "Swan Song" lettering had been.
Here's what it looked like before the alteration.
Next, as we're about to pan over to Beef's coffin, the film suddenly gets grainy, as if it had been shot on 16mm stock.
What's going on here, it appears, is that Hirsch instructed the processor to crop out the bottom half of the frame (which meant that what was left would be grainier) to avoid having "Swan Song" visible as the shot pans...it's much harder to obliterate the "Swan Song" wording as the camera is moving than when it's still.
Oh, and hey, while we're at it, here's how it looked in 1919, in the scene from The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari that appears to have served as the inspiration for Beef's unveiling.
We suspect that the reason that this shot, of the tapes in Swan's tape archive, was removed was all the readily visible Swan Song labels on the tapes.
Click here to see the tapes.
And, we think this shot of the Phantom perusing Swan's tape collection was deleted for the same reason.
Click here to help the Phantom find the contract!
Finally, many of the TV monitors have little dead songbirds superimposed over labels that had presumably said "Swan Song".
It's a shame that the whiny Grant was able to force the imposition of this cinematic vandalism, which has the overall effect of downplaying Swan's omnipotence, and of completely obliterating this recurring opening-shot motif. With most references to the larger Swan Song Enterprises empire eliminated, Swan is reduced from being a media mega-baron to merely a successful record company owner. (In theory, De Palma and producer Ed Pressman could have resisted, but they were under tremendous pressure from Fox to "solve" all the film's legal problems as quickly and quietly as possible so that the film could be released on time; it was, similarly, the pressures of the release schedule and the sensitivity of the negotiations with Fox, rather than the merits of the claim, that resulted in Phantom's financier Gustave Berne agreeing to pay some up-front cash, and a portion of his back-end participation, to MCA-Universal to dispose of that studio's claims that Phantom hewed too closely to what they regarded as "their" Phantom of the Opera storyline. Pressman told us recently, "We didn't get errors and omissions insurance, so we weren't covered for the Universal claim. That's the last time I made THAT mistake!")
|The campaign to eliminate references to swans even made its way to the movie poster and album cover. On the left is a photo of John Alvin's original painting for the Phantom movie posters, album cover, and other marketing collateral, as it appeared before Mr. Alvin modified it, painfully and by hand, at the direction of Fox advertising executives. As can be seen, it differs from the final version that was actually used (on the right) in two significant respects: First, in this pre-modified version, the neon lights form symmetrical swans on either side of Paul Williams' head, while in the final version, the swans are gone, and have been replaced by stars. Second, the title on the original version is merely "Phantom," rather than "Phantom of the Paradise." The modifications were imposed as a result of Fox's concerns about the Swan Song threats (with respect to the swans), and (with respect to the addition of "of the Paradise") possible conflicts with King Features, which owned a comic strip entitled "Phantom". We at the Archives think this is a shame; the swans were a very nice, witty touch of detail, and we like the shadowing of the word Phantom in the background, which is obliterated by the addition of "of the Paradise."
Still, like weeds pushing their way through cracks in the sidewalk, the Swan Song name does show up in the final cut here and there:
On a poster
On Beef's towel
On Swan's video player
And over the factory entrance
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